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TotH Issue 1: pg 001 by Wild-Hearts TotH Issue 1: pg 001 by Wild-Hearts
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Fugly anatomy all over this page...
Hmmph, not happy with this one bit...I might go back and edit it - but I probably won't! I just want to get this first issue done and dusted, so I can get on with the story! :la:

These are just intro pages...I wanted to make them more interesting than the usual, Black with text intro pages you see around....but I failed and made this atrociously ugly thing! :XD: LOL! Sorry!

Anyway, here's to answering those countless 'Where's the first page!?' questions ;) My apologies for my random uploading order....X_X

Typos errors? please point em' out!

And and also, IT'S FANTASY! If I get crap about it being unrealistic, I will go all crazy on yo' ass! ;)

Otherwise, Enjoy! :heart:


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:iconfallenspirit456:
FallenSpirit456 Featured By Owner May 18, 2015  New Deviant Student General Artist
THE MAIN STALLION LOOKS LIKE SPIRIT!
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:iconcordypops:
cordypops Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
:heart: it!
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:iconwolfen1991:
Wolfen1991 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I like the realism in ranks here. also the fact that the stallion is far away from the group is also very true as he needs to always have a wider view of the herd. only thing is that he seems to have a single mate rather than the harem of mares he guards but I guess it helps the story more this way. 

I love this so far
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:icondigitalbird06:
digitalbird06 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014
The horse in the bottom right corner looks a lot like Spirit
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:iconwhiteorchidrose:
WhiteOrchidRose Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm gonna re-read it till the next page comes by ^^
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:iconcodeofarms:
CodeOfArms Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Do you have any connection to the Chevalin Wanderlust or did you just choose a similar name?
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:iconalexamoro:
AlexaMORO Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
What's the horse on the last panel?  Is it connects to "Spirit" somehow?
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:iconlightfoot-hearts:
Lightfoot-Hearts Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
No. It has nothing to do with Spirit.
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:iconalexamoro:
AlexaMORO Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, it just looks similar 
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:iconshapeshiftertrilogy1:
Shapeshiftertrilogy1 Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Okay I followed this issue of the comic, and I just read the other. You discontinued both of them so I'm wondering if you are actually going to keep any of then up. I reallllly like these!! 
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:iconwild-hearts:
Wild-Hearts Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Student General Artist
This one is continuing and I've started on issue 2 :)
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:iconshapeshiftertrilogy1:
Shapeshiftertrilogy1 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh ok! Thank gosh! 
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:iconzevimaru:
Zevimaru Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
..Whispers..- I see Spirit at the bottom :blush: (I know its not him but yeah lol)
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:iconnickel-bug:
nickel-bug Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Exactly what I was saying XD
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:iconzevimaru:
Zevimaru Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Student Digital Artist


:iconowocuteplz: I bet its his twin.
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:iconnickel-bug:
nickel-bug Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*Gasps* Pikachu gasp Plz I wonder what happened to him 
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:iconzevimaru:
Zevimaru Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist



.. Mmm! Maybe, Heee.. Oh. Maybe they have two separate herds!
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:iconnickel-bug:
nickel-bug Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hhhmm..... could be could be 
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:iconhorses4ever14:
horses4ever14 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
One word: Epic :D
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:iconxxahadxx:
xXahadXx Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013
WOW 

there is no words for that 

it so good 
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:iconsquishy-123:
Squishy-123 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
Here I am being all nit-picky so long after it came out, but in the first text box the it's should be its.
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Jussayin. x)
I absolutely love this page though! Such a great intro to the story. :)
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:iconloupyvarg:
LoupyVarg Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think this is really good, you just need to edit the frame with the three horses and then it will be brilliant!
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:iconwild-hearts:
Wild-Hearts Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Student General Artist
thanks, but why do I need to edit it? :confused:
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:iconloupyvarg:
LoupyVarg Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You said that you might go back and edit it, because of anatomy, but only that one horse might need some editing. The rest is perfect! It doesn't matter really.
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:iconpokadotponies:
PokaDotPonies Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This should be made into a series of films...
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:icondiamondstream:
Diamondstream Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Does anyone thought that the brown stallion down in the right corner look like Spirit? XD
Nice first page, I like it :)
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:iconblue277:
Blue277 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah! he look just like spirit!
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:icondiamondstream:
Diamondstream Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:'D
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:icon28dragons:
28dragons Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
wow, I thought so too XD;;
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:iconwheek:
wheek Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
Are you serious
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:icondiamondstream:
Diamondstream Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, I guess
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:iconloonyowl:
loonyowl Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Great comic, I'm really enjoying it!

BTW, I did notice a couple of apostrophe problems - 'it's' in the first box should have been 'its' and 'the herds best interest' should have been 'the herd's best interest'. But don't mind me, I'm just a stickler for punctuation XD
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:iconwhytehawke:
WhyteHawke Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
In the last text panel talking about what the lead stallion does, where you said: "in the herds best interest" it should be "in the herd's best interest" Just thought I'd point that out. :)

Awesome page by the way! I love the map! :clap:
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:iconwild-hearts:
Wild-Hearts Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Student General Artist
I'm not entirely sure you've got that right. To me that sounds as if your saying 'Herd is' :shrug:

Thanks!
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:iconwhytehawke:
WhyteHawke Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm... But it's like saying (I'll just use random names) :" Making decisions in Charlie's best interest. " or "Making decisions in the group's best interest." I dunno.. I feel like it should be like that, but yeah.. :shrug: (I probably spelled decisions wrong..I can't spell that word for my life, haha)
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:iconanimel:
animel Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
Sapphire is correct, the ' is also used in possessive terms :)
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:iconbayandbareback:
BayandBareback Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student General Artist
OMG THE STALLION LOOKS JUST LIKE MY HORSE!!! :cry: i miss him but VERY NICE JOB!!!!!!!!!
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:iconaurorazilla:
Aurorazilla Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
lol i like how the one in the bottom right corner looks like Spirit!! I LOVE YOUR COMIC!! I'm addicted and have read it a million times!! I can't wait 'till issue 2 is finished <3
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:iconwheek:
wheek Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
why does everything horse have to 'look like spirit' get a life
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:iconaurorazilla:
Aurorazilla Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
because it does. and I do have a life, and you do not, because you're trying to start a stupid argument on the internet. Have fun being stupid and pathetic! :)
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:iconwild-hearts:
Wild-Hearts Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Because it's dun? :roll:
But thank you, glad you're enjoying it! ^_^
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:iconaurorazilla:
Aurorazilla Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
lol I put that before it was finished lol and no problem! :D
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:iconhbtca1998:
HBTCA1998 Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I can't stop reading!!!!! :D
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:iconthesilverbells:
TheSilverBells Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol She looks so annoyed. xD SILLEH STALLIONS.
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:iconwild-hearts:
Wild-Hearts Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Student General Artist
:giggle:
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:iconmysweetqueen:
MySweetQueen Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012
OMFG it's spirit!!! SPIRIIIIIIT!!! :heart:
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:iconwheek:
wheek Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
crazed spirit fangirl :iconinsaneplz:
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:iconmysweetqueen:
MySweetQueen Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
yup I am :D and proud! ^^
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:iconwheek:
wheek Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Why? He has little to no personality and he's just a cheap ripoff from Thowra from The Silver Brumby. Also he's a horse. don't be gross.
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:iconmysweetqueen:
MySweetQueen Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
because I like him
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